9/22/2024

First, this writing stuff is fun. I have worked to have fun and have deep characters. There is a character named Peter Smith that I really love. Among all the friends the main character has, he holds a special place as one of the closest. While he may be the target of jokes, he is also incredibly compassionate and empathetic.

The narrative consistently portrays Peter as a legendary bachelor. I’ve discovered the ideal spot to clarify the reason. Love is in the air as the book nears its end. Peter, on the other hand, doesn’t share the sentiment, and he reminisces about the past, offering the reader a glimpse into why he became disillusioned with genuine romance. Peter is open to casual intimacy, but he doesn’t seek or expect commitment. The story revolves around his junior year in college, when he realizes that after dating the same incredibly desirable woman for fourteen months, she is the one. He orchestrates an impeccable date at their perfect restaurant and goes above and beyond by hiring a violin player for the ultimate moment. The world’s cruelty shatters his romantic streak in a terribly embarrassing way during dinner. Peter showcases remarkable composure as he uncovers his fiancé’s attraction to the waiter during a trip to the bathroom. It turns out that the thumping sound coming through the vents wasn’t the rumble of an off-balance washing machine. It’s so awful, it’s surprisingly fantastic.

Being in the final straightaway is a thrilling experience, heightened by the knowledge that the story is well-supported by a strong narrative structure. Before Thanksgiving, I hope to close any gaps in my writing, complete the initial draft, and make substantial headway with editing.

Wish me luck!

E. J. Josephson